As a writer, your job is to torture your readers with tension. The fun of fiction is anticipation, and if your story doesn't have it your readers won't stick around. Here are 3 ways you might be killing your story's tension and losing readers.
Imaginary friend stays with kid through childhood and adolescence. Person starts complaining about it around In early-mid twenties, person is admitted to mental institution and diagnosed with schizophrenia and imaginary friend fights to stay